Saturday, January 9, 2010
My Name is Destruction
My name is Destruction. I am 8 years old. I was named Destruction, because on the day I was born the human race was destroyed. Except for me. I can not build. Only destroy and run. I run from the Hunters. The ones who hunt me, the ones I run from. Across the bare Earth I flee. But they are catching up coming closer every day, and when they do I will be gone or they will. They think they can kill me, but they do not know my power. They think I am a child, but they don't know how long I've lived. Now my life is in your hands. Do what you want, but remember I destroy and can do only that.
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I'm not going to write anymore of this, because I kind of wrote it so people can take it in their own direction.
ReplyDeleteI like it, it's cool because you end it by letting people take it which way the want it. So I agree with what you say about it.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a really cool introduction to a story! Maybe even one that could be published! I'd like to see what you, or someone else, if that's what you intended, could do wth this beginning. It's really nicely written! Good job Claire!
ReplyDeleteWhoa that's so neat. Instead of destruction he should be determination.
ReplyDeleteI liked it the name fit well beyond surface regognition, but the question I have is how did only a one day old baby survive for eight years alone and on the run?
ReplyDeleteWow Claire I thought that was fantastic! I loved the direction you took at the end letting people come up with the rest it was amazing!
ReplyDeleteWait does "Destruction" have super powers or somehting? It seems like it has to do with a lot of other parts of life too. It was good, and how you left us thinking bout what it might be. NICEE!!!!!!!1
ReplyDeleteThat was a good story! It was kindof creepy with the people hunting "Distruction." Great job writing it!
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